Monday 11 March 2024

Pantsing

I’m a pantser as an author. I don’t create detailed outlines about the plot before I start writing, or spend much time figuring out what kind of world I’m setting my books in. I do research when it’s needed and solve problems when they occur. My brain simply refuses to come up with anything interesting unless there’s something tangible for it to work on, so I just start writing and figure things out as I go.

I don’t go in completely blindly though. I need a premise and a good beginning, which might change later. I decide beforehand how long a book I’m going to write, how many chapters it’ll be, and how many words per chapter, all of which might change too. I know the ending I’m aiming at, usually a happily ever after or a crime solved. I know the basic structure—usually four or five short acts—and I aim at the end of the closest one at a time, where there is a twist of some kind. A random body might show up that’ll prompt me to a new direction. It’s worked more or less well for me for over thirty books.

However, as a series progress, some more planning tends to take place. The continuing backstory often influences the plot. I have a notion of which recurring characters will show up, the direction where the lives of main characters are heading, and what should happen in the lives of the minor characters. I don’t write things down beforehand, but somehow everything seems to fit. And surprises still happen.

Occasionally, the lack of planning results in the plot heading to a direction that won’t work. I then need to backtrack and rewrite, occasionally large patches even. In general, writing the way I write requires constant tweaking and rewriting. The first draft is also second, third and fifth.

And occasionally the story stalls completely. This happens almost every time, so I’ve learned to live with it. I’ll give it time, and the solution will come to me. Another rewrite might happen at this point.

Every now and then, however, I start a writing project without any plans whatsoever. Most often it’s because I’ve come up with an excellent opening line and I want to see where it leads. More often than not, it doesn’t lead to more than a couple of thousand words and an unfinished short story. But I have a side project in making that started as an opening line and which is now half a book with a clear idea of two more.

This weekend, an opening line prompted me to start a short story that practically writes itself. In fact, it’s going so well, that it can no longer be called a short story, and it’ll likely end up being a novelette. It’s nothing live I’ve written before—an isekai time loop story in a manner of Japanese light novels and mangas—which makes it so fun. I’ll very likely finish it too. Whether it’ll ever be published is another issue entirely, but at least I’ve tried something new—and gotten the opening line off my chest.

Tuesday 5 March 2024

Character studies

I have a favourite web manhwa called Jinx, officially published on a platform called Lezhin. It’s a very NSFW Korean boylove (loosely applied) drama about a sweetest of sweet sub, Kim Dan, and the reddest of red flag dom, Joo Jaekyung. It’s approaching episode 50 and there’s still no romance to speak of, and unless Mr. Joo has a personality transplant, it’ll take another 50 before the happily ever after.

Joo Jaekyung and Kim Dan in Jinx by Mingwa

Webcomics are one of the few forms of fiction out there anymore where new episodes are delivered once a week—or in case of Jinx, every ten days—and the reader or viewer has to wait for their next fix instead of streaming everything when they wish. And not many of them happen globally at once. But Jinx is published simultaneously in Korean, English and Spanish, allowing the fans all over the world a chance to gather together to talk about the latest episode at the same time.

One could argue that streaming a whole series enables this too, but the conversations are often about the larger picture when talking about the whole series, and people stream whenever they wish, so they join the conversation in their own pace. Readers of Jinx are united in their agony of waiting, so they gather together to analyse every new episode for its minutest detail. And with a TV series, the attention seldom is on characters the way it is on Joo Jaekyung.

Mr. Joo is a bully, in and out of bed, and few are brave enough to call him on it. Kim Dan bears the brunt of it, but because he’s financially dependent on Mr. Joo, and because Mr. Joo has occasionally been nice to him, he does it willingly. Korean culture might come into play here as well, because Kim Dan mostly does it for his grandmother who is ill. And recently, he’s developed romantic feelings.

Joo Jaekyung in Jinx by Mingwa

Fandom is divided. There are those who hate Mr. Joo with passion. I don’t know why they return week after week, as it’s not a free comic. Then there are the apologists. Mr. Joo has to have a reason for his behaviour. Latest episode (ep. 49) hinted at him being bullied as a child, which sent the speculations on overdrive. And then there are those of us who are waiting for him to come to his senses, one way or another.

(As an aside, Joo Jaekyung, an MMA fighter, is never violent against Kim Dan. I think it would be game over for most of us, if he were.)

As a reader, I’m in for the ride. As a writer though, I read the commentary with fascination. It’s interesting to realise how differently people interpret the few panels of each episode. How some see goodness in smallest details, and are willing to forgive almost everything for love that surely must wait in the end. How for others, character change isn’t possible. Some put their hopes in events that must knock some sense into Mr. Joo, which others discard instantly.

Reading novels and their reviews, I’ve often wondered how people can interpret the same characters so differently. Here, the same happens in real time, and I still don’t quite understand it (though it does explain some real-life behaviour people show in their relationships). As a writer, however, it gives me a bit more confidence to write the characters the way I want. They’ll be interpreted the way I didn’t intend to anyway, for reasons I’m unable to fathom.

Mingwa, the author-artist of Jinx, seems to know this well. Or they simply make the most of the form of serialised comic that almost demands there’s a twist in every episode. So far, Joo Jaekyung hasn’t behaved quite as readers expect him to between one episode and next, and I doubt he ever will. The latest episode ended at a nailbiter that’ll surely result in Mr. Joo blowing his gasket in the next, and Kim Dan will be the target. But it might just as well go completely differently.

Final panel of ep. 49 of Jinx by Mingwa

I don’t quite have the confidence to make my characters behave so differently between one moment and the next. But it makes for an interesting reading, so maybe in the future, I’ll be able to losen up a bit with them. Something to look forward to.

Monday 26 February 2024

Facing the final boss

You can tell by the title that I’ve been reading too much manga lately. I’ve also been writing a book where the protagonists are facing the same adversary they’ve faced once before, and it’s meant to be the battle that ends the series. They almost lost the previous time, and now the stakes are higher.

In Saved by the Spell, House of Magic 2, Phoebe, Kane and their mage, vampire and werewolf friends faced a dark mage, Julius Blackhart. His goal was simple: he wanted to take over London and a powerful spell protecting it. For nefarious purposes, naturally. He was defeated, but only barely.

Now he’s back in book 5, and, naturally, he has to be more difficult to defeat than before to keep the readers’ interest. He’s become a warlock and has more powerful allies too—as far as warlocks are willing to have allies.

But having the good guys face the same bad guy, even if more powerful, and likely fight the same battle too, is boring. I tried to find ways to make the antagonist more interesting, and raise the stakes for the good guys. Nothing helped. Until I came to ask, what if Blackhart isn’t the final boss.

The readers of this blog know I’ve struggled with House of Magic 5 since January. It’s the end of February and the book hasn’t progressed at all. The only explanation I eventually came up with was that Blackhart and his goals weren’t interesting enough for me. So they probably wouldn’t interest my readers either.

However, once I came up with the idea that Blackhart isn’t the final boss Phoebe and Kane are facing, the story started to develop in a whole new way. The big question of course is, who is worse than a warlock in this urban fantasy world, and what does he/she want.

I’m not giving the answer here, but it does take the story out of London. It might take it out of this world as well. The opportunity to imagine a completely new world is intriguing, and will push me to write the book faster. I hope, anyway. And if all goes well, it will give me a reason to write more books in this series too.

Monday 19 February 2024

Getting the tone right

I write romances and mysteries, both contemporary and paranormal, cozy and a bit edgier. When I first started publishing, I had two pen names to keep the genres from getting mixed up. But at some point, it felt easier to combine everything under one pen name, and so my genre selection became a bit eclectic.

When it comes to romances, whether contemporary or paranormal, my books always have at least one sex scene. They’re fairly explicit, though never terribly long. They are romances, after all, not erotica. But not all books with romances need sex scenes.

When I started writing P.I. Tracy Hayes mysteries, I knew that there would be a slow-building romance between Tracy and Jackson, her boss. It took until book 7, Valentine of a P.I., before the pair ended up in bed together. And when they did, I closed the bedroom door. For me, it was enough to know that they’d reached that point. There have been four more books since, and the bedroom door has stayed closed.

I made the same decision with my paranormal cozy series, House of Magic. That, too, has a slow romance between Phoebe and her boss Kane, but they only waited until book 4, Magic by the Book, to get in bed together. And I closed the door again.

It’s not like I don’t know how to write sex scenes. I chose not to.

However, my readers aren’t entirely happy. Twice now, I’ve had reviewers specifically mention the disappointing lack of sex and tell that they’d lowered the rating because of it. As a reader, I get it. You’ve waited long enough and deserve some spice. But as the author, I have to get the tone right. And sex would ruin it.

It’s not always about sex either. I’ve had reviewers complain for my use of f-word in my cozy mysteries. And I understand where they’re coming from too. However, my mysteries aren’t entirely cozy. That’s especially true with my crime caper series, The Reed Files, where the male MC, Eliot, is a former mafia enforcer from New Jersey. I simply cannot imagine he wouldn’t use the f-word. So those will stay.

Violence, too, is a balancing act. A writer asked on social media the other day, how much violence should there be in a historical fantasy. Readers might expect some of it, but others might be put off. At the end of the day, though, it’s the writer’s world and they get to decide. For every reader they might lose for not meeting the readers expectations—and readers are so diverse, it’s impossible to meet all of them—they might gain two.

And sometimes I want to push the genre a bit too. So, very likely, The Reed Files at least will have an explicit sex scene or two in the future—once the slow-burn romance reaches that far. And I wouldn’t put it past some characters in the House of Magic using the f-word too. The readers who find curse words too much might be outraged by the sex scenes, but the readers who want the sex will be happy. Most importantly, I’ve written the book that I want to write.

Monday 12 February 2024

Change of pace

As those who have read this blog this year may have noticed, I’ve struggled with writing House of Magic 5. Last week wasn’t any more productive than before, and after 26 writing days, the manuscript stands at whopping 9000 words, averaging 350 words a day.

It has, however, presented me with two surprises already. One is a romantic pair I had no plans of forming between two side-characters. One moment I was stuck, and the next, on a whim, I paired them. And it works. For me, at least. I’m not sure how the readers will react, as one of them is a bit of a fan favourite.

The other surprise is the need for a change in the narrative pace. The series is told in one character’s first-person point of view, which works fine. However, due to events in the previous book, the rather vast cast is split in two for most of this one, leaving the MC’s romantic interest in the dark. So, I was contemplating writing some chapters from his point of view.

I’ve never done such a switch in the middle of a series. I have a dual point of view series where both MCs narrate in first person, and several books in third person. Here though, I thought the additional point of view could be in third person. I’ve read books where the MC is in first person and the other points of view are in third person. Occasionally it works, and then other times it doesn’t.

The other option is to use first person for him as well, but I’m hesitant to use that. I’m not sure I’d get his voice right, as he’s such a different person from the MC. And part of his allure is that he’s a bit of a mystery for the MC and reader alike. Would it ruin the series if we get an insight into him as well?

I don’t know the answer. And until I do, the book might stall even more. I’ll let you know how it goes.

Monday 5 February 2024

Naming names

One of the most difficult things for me in writing fiction is coming up with names for the characters. There isn’t a character so trivial that I wouldn’t pay attention to their name, and I agonise endlessly about the names of the main characters. A name that felt good at the start of the writing process might feel completely wrong by the end of it, and has to be changed.

For trivial characters like murder victims, random neighbours, and people with a line or two who nonetheless get a name, I usually turn to social media. I follow thousands of people on X with both unique and mundane names, but I usually go for the latter. I take the first name from one and the last name from another, and have a suitable random character name that should be as forgettable as the character.

Trivial characters can never have interesting names. Those are reserved for the main ones. I used to have a long list of names I found interesting, some suitable for heroes and others for villains, but after 35 books, I’ve exhausted most of it and need to come up with new ones all the time. Internet with its baby name sites and other helpful lists is invaluable, but the abundance of names also makes it difficult to choose the best ones.

The series that’s been especially annoying in this respect is The Reed Files. Both main characters are criminals who change their names often, and I want all the names to be interesting and suitable for them. I’m particularly fond of the name Eliot Reed, but there will come a time when he’ll have to ditch it for good. But his character is already established, making it even more difficult to choose a good name. Then again, he started his life as Jonathan Moreira in the P.I. Tracy Hayes series, so it’s not like I haven’t changed it before.

Occasionally I choose the name first and make the character to match. Other times, I plan the character first and then choose the name. A working-class detective will have a different name than a centuries old vampire aristocrat, obviously. Age and time matter too. Not all modern names were around a century ago and vice versa. Behind the Name site that I often use has lists of most popular names in each country for each year, going back a few decades, which is usually enough for me. Then it’s the question of whether I want my character to have a popular name or a unique one. Would a unique name change the character?

I’m currently planning another spin-off from the P.I. Tracy Hayes series. It’ll feature her brother Trevor, so his name is set. But the upcoming other MC is giving me a headache.

I came up with the series name first, which features the character’s last name. Choosing the first name that will match it has proven annoying. Even more so, because I don’t exactly know yet what kind of a character I’m dealing with: rich, poor, educated, cool, messy or something else. I came up with a good one, and then I tried to pronounce it and it turned out to be a mouthful, so that had to go. I’m not in a hurry, the series won’t launch until next year, but it’s bugging me.

I have another series in the making on the background where the names give me a bit of a headache too. They didn’t at first and I was really happy with the names of both MCs. Then I changed the ethnicity of one of them, and now I’m not sure if the name should change to match or not. And then I realised I’d used the name of the other MC for a villain in a different book. There probably won’t be people who remember—I didn’t until I reread the book the other day—but it’s started to annoy me as well. So that’ll have to change too. Maybe.

So far, each character has had a name that I like by the time I hit the publish button, but I’ve occasionally wished later that I’d chosen differently. The most obvious annoyance is Alexander Hamilton, the vampire lord in my Two-Natured London series—no relation to the historical person—but I mostly call him Lord Foley anyway. And I’ve only once used the same name for the hero in two different books, that I recall. I have Marcus Hamilton in Beloved Warrior of Two-Natured London series, and Marcus Wright in Which Way to Love?, a stand-alone contemporary romance. In my defence, I originally published the latter under a different pen name, so it didn’t seem to matter at that time.


I plan to write many more books in the future, so the problem of the names will only become worse. But it’s a fun challenge, and I haven’t failed yet.

Monday 29 January 2024

Reading my own books

I’ve been publishing my own books since 2012 and have 35 books out, most of them in four series. That’s quite a lot of books to keep tabs on when writing series with continuing plots and recurring characters.

I try to keep good notes on what characters look like and where they live, but it took me a while to pick up the habit, so earlier books don’t have those. Some details I don’t think are important to write down, only to learn my error later. I check out the pertinent bits, but continuity errors occasionally occur.

However, I seldom read entire books, not even the previous one in the series in preparation for the next. I don’t have time for it, and rereading books that I already know well seem pointless when there are so many new books to read.

The only exception was several years ago, when I read and partially rewrote the first three books that I’ve published. They sorely needed refreshing, but my writing has improved a lot since too, and I think they and other early books of mine could use another rewrite.

But this month, I’ve read three of my books. I started with It Happened on a Lie, a stand-alone contemporary romance that I first published in 2014. I had a vague recollection that it wasn’t very good, so as I prepared to upload a new cover for it, I read it through.

To my surprise, it wasn’t as bad as I remembered. The ending is a bit abrupt, but it’s only a novella, some 25000 words, and the romance concludes well, so it didn’t matter. I did consider writing one more act, but it seemed to have everything it needed, so I let it be. I did make some changes though.

The novella was an experiment in length to see whether I could write a complete story in as few words as possible. While the characters were surprisingly well-developed for such a short work, it had led to cutting corners, like omitting names of speakers in several places, creating confusing conversations. It wasn’t a big task to add those. And now I can rest easy knowing that even though it isn’t exactly a masterpiece of romantic fiction, it’s not bad as I thought.

Last week, I read two of my House of Magic books, Saved by the Spell (book 2), and Magic by the Book (book 4). I’d started writing book 5, thinking I can build on events in those two books, but then it turned out I had no recollection of how they ended. I especially couldn’t remember the fate of the bad guy in one of them. So a reread was in order.

Saved by the Spell was published in 2021, but I’d completely forgotten what happens in it. I didn’t remember a major character, I’d forgotten the antagonist’s motivation, and many plot twists came as a surprise for me. I have no idea what past me was thinking, but the present me would’ve written a different story.

But it was fun to reminisce. It was nice to see where the characters had been, and how far they’ve come since. I spotted some errors too, like an embarrassing typo in the first chapter and the colour of one car changing. I think I changed it back in the subsequent book, but I need to check.

Magic by the Book came out last year, but it was full of details I’d forgotten that I need for the upcoming book to avoid continuity errors. They were good details for planning the plot too, something that I’ve been struggling with the whole month. Now I think I’m ready to tackle that task.

All in all, a good exercise. And I think I’ll continue with it. This year I’ll publish P.I. Tracy Hayes 12, which might be the last one in the series—for now. It’ll be nice to remember the journey and wrap up some things in the last book, and if inspiration strikes, maybe plan for the future books too. Or maybe a spin-off…

Do you reread your own books? Do you still like them, or has your style and tastes changed since writing them?